Comments : A Little Girls Dying Wish

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! that's really sad but also very good!

  • 14 years ago

    by Minlow20

    Hailey,
    I really liked your power it was really powerful. It also makes you think alot. Well keep writing your really good at it. Well g2g bye!
    Always,
    Lindsay

  • 14 years ago

    by Cara

    I really loved this poem it was so good
    My boyfriend died not to long ago its been about a month he didnt have cancer or anything like that he was in a car accident and he died of injuries he was only sixteen Umm keep up the good work your a VERY GOOD Writter
    cara

  • 14 years ago

    by Terray

    That was awesome I loved it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Hannah

    that was a great poem...good idea

  • 14 years ago

    by Casey

    This is a really good poem. My dad died about 7 month ago of cancer, and you really put your self in that place. It made me cry, but it was GREAT!

    Casey

  • 14 years ago

    by Hailey

    ThankYou EveryOne....Wierd Place I Put Myself In too Write This But Differant,..My Heart Goes Out To anyone Who has Lost Someone..Ive Never Lost Someone To Something Like That...But I Do Feel Alot For People..So Tahnks For Reading And Be Sure To Check out The Rest Of My Poems..Thankyou..Your All an Ispirtaion..Love Hailey

  • 14 years ago

    by xCrImSoNxTeArSx

    This poem is so sad....But it's very well written! Keep up the great work!
    mwa!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by GREEN EYES

    hey,i read this poem many times,because you wrote it perfect,while I was reading I was thinking that it is a true story...
    CIAO!!

  • 13 years ago

    by crystal

    that was really good i was balling as i read it.

  • 12 years ago

    by fakegreeneyes

    Wow..ur really good.... :)