awesome. short, but so good. i love the title and the phrases you use "shattered moonbeams" and my fav line "Destiny cut cut by the blade of my knife" wow. i loved the irony and beautiful stances you used, gr8 job.
This is a very beautiful piece! I love it...it truly shines. Thank you for the most touching comments ever. They are so very sweet, and they make me feel better even by just a little. You must remember all the tough times you had when you were a teen.
13 years ago
by Gemma Sinead Hayward
i know i've already commented but I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM! i love it so much. the structure, the language, the flow! GIVE ME MORE!!!!!
wow...i rly lyked that poem! I loved how u worded everything...it reminded me of myself...keep writing! U have great talent! Stay strong...I always try 2! If ya need ne1...i'm here 2 tlk...Much love, Amy