Comments : Melancholy Sunshine

  • 13 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    oh soooo sad.... I love the almost limerickal (is that a word?) quality of this... it's almost... I dunno,...cute...which just adds a bit of irony to the sadness of it.

    Great work!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Great poem Holly, I almost could sing it, the words are like the chorus of a song. Please keep up the good work. Love, Timothy r

  • 13 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awesome poem holly...i understood it (i read your post in "discussion") i think it's really good..<3
    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 13 years ago

    by Annie

    i like it. i read in a note that you've never written anything in that format before, but its good for a first one. i like it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Amy

    Geat poem. I really liked the style you wrote this in it. Keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by pinkalias

    awesome. short, but so good. i love the title and the phrases you use "shattered moonbeams" and my fav line "Destiny cut cut by the blade of my knife" wow. i loved the irony and beautiful stances you used, gr8 job.

  • 13 years ago

    by stephanie

    hey that was a really good poem!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    that was to short for my liking, but it was still amazing! you seem very talented and experienced in poetry! please keep writing! and keep in touch
    lexi lou

  • 13 years ago

    by Atahan Tolunay

    I love the form, its touching. Very nice work!

  • 13 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    You are the overlord of fluency! your flow is excellant and the imagery is class

  • 13 years ago

    by Atahan Tolunay

    I really like this one, especially the structure of the poem. Great talent. :-p

  • 13 years ago

    by Jennie

    This is a very beautiful piece! I love it...it truly shines. Thank you for the most touching comments ever. They are so very sweet, and they make me feel better even by just a little. You must remember all the tough times you had when you were a teen.

  • 13 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    i know i've already commented but I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM! i love it so much. the structure, the language, the flow! GIVE ME MORE!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    I like it

  • 12 years ago

    by Timothy

    very unique style. Very cool. I have been on here for quite awhile now, and somehow missed you! I'll have to check more of your work!!

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*LorienElf*~

    ooo so beautiful!
    loved it!
    the imagery was fantasic, it really made you feel everything
    wonderful work, keep it up!

    ~*LorienElf*~

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy~Lynn

    wow...i rly lyked that poem! I loved how u worded everything...it reminded me of myself...keep writing! U have great talent! Stay strong...I always try 2! If ya need ne1...i'm here 2 tlk...Much love, Amy

  • 12 years ago

    by Forever29

    Excellent poem 5!

  • 12 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    that's a beautiful piece good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Harry Bryant

    good job Holly, nice style, and great insight, perfectly blended into the present. keep up the great works. Harry