Comments : Melancholy Sunshine

  • 19 years ago

    by gemma

    WOW its really ace, i love everything u write!!!! take care xxxxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Like a zoomed shot, the picture is coming into focus, i think the block is freezing too, lol
    Good and thoughtful

  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Kool,direct and to the point. I can see the blog is wanning lol, Keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Wow, great write. Such a beautiful poem. I love it. Nice work. <3333

  • Holly, you are so talented. your work is beauiful, i love reading your poetry. very well done on this peice, unique style, nice flow. the titles awsome by the way! keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I thought that this was an interesting style to write in. Keep up the good work. You are really talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    This sounds like one of those poems where you wake up in the middle of the night and it's just there.. even if it's not it's still a very good poem! I've never read anything like this.. I like it a lot =)
    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy