Break Up

by Kaleigh   Oct 13, 2004


Please tell me what you think

Tonight we fought again
And I waited up for your call
Just to hear you say you love me
And lets forget this all

But the phone never rang
And I lost what I had treasured
The love for you I had inside
To anything would never measure

I cant explain this deep heart ache
Thoughts of death passed through my mind
I tried to tell you how I felt
But you shut the door every time

Our precious love had suddenly ended
For something I tried to say
Just something you would never understand
Because you’ve never felt this way

I treated you the best that I could
I tried so hard to keep you
But the more I tried the more you gave up
The more I thought I needed you

The more I needed to feel your touch
But it would never feel the same
We once were both in love
But now its just a game

We needed to just take a break
And I knew you thought it too.
Cause when we talked, we just sat
And my worst fear had came true

The thought of creating something
That wasn't meant to be
Is just so hard to accept
Because I loved you and you loved me

And when it came to breaking up
You didn't even try
I guess that you not caring
Shouldn't have came to such a surprise

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  • 19 years ago

    by ♥kHarIsMa♥

    good poem...keep writin

  • 19 years ago

    by HallyAnn

    So are you too still together then?

  • 19 years ago

    by LiL One

    Girl...let me tell you, first of all I loved the poem, beautiful piece, well I know how you feel, I was in a relationship like that and when we fell off, I would just wait for his phone call or anything just to make me feel like he still loved me, I know it will take time to mend, but good luck!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sam

    Really good poem..I thought i wrote it for a second...It's exactly how i am.stay up all nite for a call n don't get one n u can't do a thing about it...read some of my poems n tell me wat u think..a few are kinda like this one..thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffany Chu

    i thought u wrote a great poem i kno how u feel u should read my poem trying to forget and let me kno wut u think if u wanna talk my s/n is blahin247