this is really good!! great job!

omg, that was one of the best things ive ever read on this site or anywhere else. i know the feeling though, ive been abused, raped, ignored, watched ppl i care about die, but hold on, cus you can get through. im pray for you, and deifnitely a 5. btw, if you ever need someone to talk to...im here. :)

i love it its so sad.....i'll always be here fer you.......luv ya
~yolande~

WOW. TONZ OF EMOTION. TOTALLY KICKASS POEM BTW. I HAVENT BEEN RAPED OR ANYTHING. I DO WAKE UP EVERY DAY THOUGH... WISHING I COULD DIE. I ALSO SCREAM AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS ASKING GOD WHY ME? THATS TOUGH STUFF WITH JUST THAT. I IMAGINE THAT WITH EVERYTHING ELSE THATS HAPPENED TO YOU THAT YOU MUST BE PRETTY SCARED AND ALONE. UR IN MY PRAYERS. KEEP WRITING!!! AND POST EM!! MUCH LOVE!!! -CAL

WOW. TONZ OF EMOTION. TOTALLY KICKASS POEM BTW. I HAVENT BEEN RAPED OR ANYTHING. I DO WAKE UP EVERY DAY THOUGH... WISHING I COULD DIE. I ALSO SCREAM AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS ASKING GOD WHY ME? THATS TOUGH STUFF WITH JUST THAT. I IMAGINE THAT WITH EVERYTHING ELSE THATS HAPPENED TO YOU THAT YOU MUST BE PRETTY SCARED AND ALONE. UR IN MY PRAYERS. KEEP WRITING!!! AND POST EM!! MUCH LOVE!!! -CAL

hey this is a good poem it reminds me of my friends life ya.

Wow. That was deep. I'm going to go cry now.

Very VERY WELL written!! You did such a magnificent job hun. This made me feel as if my heart had stopped beating. I can and surely many other people can relate to this. You did a fanastic job. I have never* seen 53 votes with 5.0 and you know you deserve it! Awesome Job!

Continue Writing!

Take Care, Jessica xxxxx

Damn.. that was a very well put poem.. I really liked it keep up the work!! Best poem on the site~~
Erin**

thanx guyz.... muahzzz.
cyera

you are a great writing i havent been in your shoes though some of this but i have been faced with rape, and a friend i knew burned in a fire, my sister have a friend blow his brains, and to think that you dealt with more i pray for you, come to me or anyone else if you need a lending hand im sure someone will care for you

WOW girl tonnes and tonnes of emotions and realism in this poem - i love poem like this one that i sit there and read and think in my head "Oh my god this person has lived my life" i could totally relate girl so dont ever think your alone k - check my profile and email me if you ever wanna chat and if not ill keep an eye on your poems cause this impressed the hell outta me!
Luv and Thanks Eirisa xxox

This is a Great Poem! Good job!

amazing...im speechles....amazing...

Omg that was sooooo good!! That was like the best poem ive ever read. god job + keep doin what u do cuz ur awesome at it. =o)

Girl yo poem was so deep it had a susta ova here wantin to cry.Gurl i am sorry all of that stuff happen to you i wish i knew you so i can talk to you to make you feel better.I use to want to die but i relize that if you have GOD in yo life girl it will make you feel better.Please don't do nothin to hurt yoself.i don't know u but i understad what you sayin and we probably can be cool u can be m homey.Don't do nothin to hurt yoself i wana get to know you.

It's hard to say something like, "Great Poem" to something like this. yes, it's well written, but if that were to be all I said, then I'd be missing the point. If all of these things are really true, then I am SO sorry. No one deserves this kind of treatment. However, it IS a very well-written poem.

Please check my poems out! ~Lipton

omg how did you write this?

omg this is good

omg thats like the best poem ever im over here in tears *sniff* *sniff*