I like to judge a solid not by the literature formal point of view but from if it made me feel something strong and I could get a clear message. This poem message is not very hard to get. Very against the war and Bush's policy. Also, there is an underlying meaning as well. You write about the future childern and not being abel to see then if Bush leads the counrty. I can feel that this poem is writen by a person who is really worried about our country and its people if Bush leads. I have to agree. I am very worried as well.

Nice poem! I love it!

I will not judge the motives in your heart but i say if we can live through president's nixon, carter, and ford then we can live through one Bush. and remember anyone can tear something down but only the true will build it up afterwards. i say support our commander-in-chief, it's a hard job and he has to do it

your servant:
david