Comments : Rejection

  • 13 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Beautiful love poem and i don't know why someone had rated it one....I Guess u should writing more love poems from now on...Take care...FIVE>>>

  • 13 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    wow! thank you for telling me to read this poem! it touched me truly and i know exactly how it feels! wow......thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem! i hope to hear more from you!
    Lexi Lou

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This one is in my book

  • 8 years ago

    by Birgit

    I want to bring out a book too, some day =]

    But about this poem..
    It's GREAT. I just hope I'll never get rejected.. cause I was reading it and up till the 3rd stanza I was like; Yeah, I've felt like this! And then it started to turn into a sad story.. Hehe. So it made me a little sad. I'm sorry it happened to you.. But it's good you've learned from it =] But that's just something in life; You ALWAYS learn from the past, bad experiences or even the good ones =] -But why the heck am I telling this to somebody who's way older than me.. =P -
    Good job.
    5/5
    x

  • 8 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This poem/prose is very touching. So many of us can relates to it. Love is not love when there is no return. If someone being rejected, it simply means there were no returns and a love like this can never last. What is positive about it, is that, every has his/her special one out there in the world. Just search for it, sometimes we never find it, but sometimes it comes to us when we least expected. Well done 5/5, kel.

  • 8 years ago

    by Kaila

    Nice poem:) I'm a sap for the love ones. Well my first critique would just to be to shorten the lines up a little bit. By doing that on the page the poem looks neater. Also the rhyming got in the way for me a little bit. I think if you weren't focsed on rhyming the last words could have been stronger. Although this piece was a tad cliche I still enjoyed it 4/5

  • 8 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I love this poem so much!!!!! i think it's beautiful. i think that so many people can relate to the story behind it. very insightful. i loved it a lot!!!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Jackie

    This is an excellent poem, I'm surprised I've never read it before. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Walter F Alvarado

    Wow yea I know that same feeling..Awesome Poem

  • 8 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    This was really great. i loved it! it is very relatable to people and has so much emotion in it. keep it up! please comment on my latest poems "broken down road" and "beginnings"

  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    You have done a wonderful job on this realistic piece.Rejection, that terrible word that kept so many including myself, from taking that one step to find love.
    I also like the message about looking above if one ever find themnselves in this situation.God will never reject anyone.
    Over all this is a beautiful piece.
    Great job.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 8 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow! this poem is honestly beautiful! the best i've read in a long time...its so sad and heartbreaking, i can feel your pain, and im sure many could relate to all the emotions you expressed so clearly and well. I enjoyed reading it all the way to the end, i liked how you ended this, truly inspiring, truly beautiful...Don't stop writing...MEZi x

  • 8 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved this poem. So cute:) All my suggestions are, are maybe shorten up the lines a bit because when I first pulled this up I was hesitant to read it. But I did love it nice job!
    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    A wonderful write, Michael. How well you hit on some of the hardest points of being rejected. And how well you reminded me of my own experience. That in itself, is testament of your talent. Great piece. Thanks.

  • 7 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    This was so incredibly beautiful that words can't even describe. great job!! would you please read and comment on my "scars" poem?? i would love some feedback.

  • 7 years ago

    by Jessica

    I love all of your poetry.
    the ones i read anyways.
    :))
    this poem in by far my favorite though.
    I dont know why, it just is.
    dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

    And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
    thanks love!

    -jesss.
    Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

  • 7 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    You have a lovely flow to your poetry, starting with questions of wonder...it was like story and solid start and encapsulating middle and a wonderful end. terriffic

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww... such a sad yet beautiful poem.. You write about such a deep emotion that many people can relate to... The story you told through your poetry was so touching. Great job

  • 6 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this poem. I felt every word. Thank you for sharing it

    ~ Liz ~

  • 6 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    Yes..these words are very true...
    keep on believing HE would soon give you the one HE created just for you!! =)
    very nice poem!!