darkness was etched inside my mind as i read this. good poem!

i like this poem it is GOOD
*kendra*

This is definetely a dark poem. I liked the way it was written, I think my only qualm is that there were too many big words! LOL. I need you to dumb it down a bit. All in all, I think it was great. Sounded almost professional.

*gasps* *rereads* that was brilliant! Dark, truthful, and filled with beautiful words and beautiful meanings. You truly wrote an excellent poem, well done!