Comments : It was an accident

  • 13 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    *Blinks back tears* that was... beautiful, extremely sad. Your title made me interested, and I am so glad I read it. At first I didn't understand what the poem was about. But honestly... well done, you've written an amazing poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by monique

    it was really good how did you come up with it wow!!

  • 13 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    i loved it keep it up u r so good at writing......it was sooooo sad it made me cry

  • 13 years ago

    by Gem

    i loved that poem. the magic of your poetry has touched many people. WELL DONE

  • 13 years ago

    by candy

    thanks so much to everyone. that means alot, and i was just thinking and thought of it

  • 13 years ago

    by Broken

    wow...that was powerful! i'm still trying not to cry...i loved it....i hope that this isn't how u want everything to end....just keep you head up ... remember: your life is what you make it

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    OH WOW!! that was absolutley...i dont even think there;s a word..That was honostley one of the best i've heard in a while! i mean it was so sad yet so good!! You did such a wonderful job..i hope you never do such a thing no matter how hard life is! But yet i dont know you situation all i can do is tell you how great of a poet you are!! This just shocked the crap out of me!! OK well i'm done babbling on ..once again..terrific job!! Much love,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 13 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Im crying
    Worth a five easily
    I wont say too much to take away from this poem but it blew me away!

  • 13 years ago

    by ~Bloodied&Broken

    OMG! That is MARVELLOUS! If you could give me any tips on writing, it would be GREATLY Appreciated! KEEP UP THE MARVELLOUS WORK *5*

  • 13 years ago

    by olivia

    It was very beautiful .. made me htink of my bro who i lost thru suicide .. great poem very touching

  • 13 years ago

    by Kristina

    this is soooooo good! keep up the good work!

  • 13 years ago

    by candy

    thank you sooo much!!

  • 13 years ago

    by pinkalias

    i know he cannot hear me
    but i whisper "i love you so
    its time to say goodbye
    I'm gone, now let me go"

    i honestly love that stance. it almost brought me to tears. the whole thing was beautiful and i liked how there was a twist in the middle of it. i love that you told a story of a girl commiting suicde and her watching the effect it had on her loved ones. great job,

  • 13 years ago

    by candy

    thank you sooo much. i love getting commetns, and please...feel free to send me a personal message, i would love to hear from all of you

  • 13 years ago

    by Shadowed_Thoughts

    wow that is great i have to keep myself from crying as i am in school keep it cant wait to read more -krystal

  • 13 years ago

    by Johnny Mac

    I'd have to say the best one i've read on this website so far..very very nice

  • 13 years ago

    by candy

    thank you all so much. keep the comments comin!! lol.

  • 13 years ago

    by sheena tuttle

    this is such a good poem but really sad
    good job

  • 13 years ago

    by stephanie

    that was amasing!

  • 13 years ago

    by candy

    thanks