*Blinks back tears* that was... beautiful, extremely sad. Your title made me interested, and I am so glad I read it. At first I didn't understand what the poem was about. But honestly... well done, you've written an amazing poem.
OH WOW!! that was absolutley...i dont even think there;s a word..That was honostley one of the best i've heard in a while! i mean it was so sad yet so good!! You did such a wonderful job..i hope you never do such a thing no matter how hard life is! But yet i dont know you situation all i can do is tell you how great of a poet you are!! This just shocked the crap out of me!! OK well i'm done babbling on ..once again..terrific job!! Much love,
i know he cannot hear me
but i whisper "i love you so
its time to say goodbye
I'm gone, now let me go"
i honestly love that stance. it almost brought me to tears. the whole thing was beautiful and i liked how there was a twist in the middle of it. i love that you told a story of a girl commiting suicde and her watching the effect it had on her loved ones. great job,