Well i can say you speak the truth in this poem, i really liked it i have no suggestions what so ever...actually i do....never stop writing...LOL..what can i say i suck at giving advice..but i try...it was short and right to the point best kinda poems....lol

p.s. thanks for the comments on my poems and suggestion i appreciate it..

**always**
Scooby

good short sweet simple and to the point like it