A Stupid Poem

by Luvmeluvr   Oct 23, 2004


This is a poem I wrote a looooong time ago, so it isn't very good, but here goes:

Living a life and living a lie
Wearing a smile, trying not to cry

Saying you're happy, knowing you're not
Pretending it's okay so you won't get caught

Feeling unwanted and feeling alone
In a room full of people my spirit had flown

It's gone from existence, it's gone from my mind
And now with no soul, I hope I'll be fine

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    I really like it. short but very to the point and very true

  • 19 years ago

    by Stacy

    your poem is great! i love it

  • 19 years ago

    by in the realm of Chaos

    your poems are short n' sweet, like mine!! thats why i appreciate your poems. i feel like i can connect to it. you got it, girl!!

    ~speak volumes w/o saying a dammn word~

  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    Great poem..its short but effective..its really awesome...keep it up!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kara !

    I'm very fond of this poem. Something about it was very compelling.

    x

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