I lke this it is short and sweet and gets the point across!

it very beautiful to me

ohh thats not bad at all it's simple and could use more content but it's not bad at all and for a starter it's actually good cause most people just murder poetry when they start lol

good job

Simple and brilliant i like ur style

Beautiful poem, very nice rhyming and wording. I could really relate to this poem too, keep it up!

...Well...Luvmeluvr I thought this was inspiration and a great piece:) Keep on with you creative work:D!!! Even if it's a old poem:)!!! Check on mine if you have anytime:) Take Care...
Chua...

**With Love Sedusha**

i love this poem! it was perfect timing i feel this exact wya and you have perfect way of catching it...short but perfect! i love the saying your perfect but knowing your not~!keep in touch!
lexi lou

You made a very poignant statement , well expressed in a few short words. Nice job,

It reminded me what happens when people are greeted with "hi, how are you?" everyone simply responds by saying "fine" or "just great."

I'm very fond of this poem. Something about it was very compelling.

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Great poem..its short but effective..its really awesome...keep it up!!!

your poems are short n' sweet, like mine!! thats why i appreciate your poems. i feel like i can connect to it. you got it, girl!!

~speak volumes w/o saying a dammn word~

your poem is great! i love it

I really like it. short but very to the point and very true