wow that's awesome.. keep writing dear~

W..o.w. This is..wow! Awesome Job hun! Full of heartbreaking sadness. You conveyed the feelings in this poem very well. Great Work. Keep on writing! By the way, thanks for the comment on my poem, much appreciated :)

Take Care, Jess xxxx

Disturbing and sad. Good poem.

Woah. I like this. It was good. Very well written..

BTW, thanks for commenting on mah poem! You're a doll!