Comments : Mommy where are you?

  • 13 years ago

    by Nobrainy_duh

    Very good, very touching. Keep up the good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by candy

    thanks

  • 13 years ago

    by Danielle Riddle

    hey that poem was good, i really liked it, if you get a change comment some of time Thanx

  • 13 years ago

    by Concealing Words

    I thought that is avery well written poem, very emotional and a lot of feeling. I don't know if this is true or not, but you did a very good job. keep it up and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by callie

    its really awesome. i like how it sounds like its a person but it turned out to be cancer. keep writing. much love -cal

  • 13 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    this is a great poem, very very sad and touching, great job. i loved it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Megin

    aw...I thought that poem was really good! its so sad!

  • 13 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    Great poem, it had a great story line, the rhythum was kind of off though. Awesome job anyways, keep writing.
    Love,

    -Blue

  • 13 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    very sad but i like how u wrote it... it flowed pretty ok =) i gave it a 5 =) hope u pass by mine sometimes... much love...

  • 13 years ago

    by foreverhappy

    wow.. that poem was amazing.. Your a great writer! Keep up the good work

  • 13 years ago

    by Lily Ashford

    that nearly made me cry and thats hard to do

  • 13 years ago

    by Armed-Alcoholic

    this is a great poem,
    Ur work is amazing...
    Keep writing

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessy

    Omg this poem rocks its sad but awsome check me out csometime and keep righting u rock

  • 13 years ago

    by Danielle D

    ehy this is a really good poem if its ture i hope u get better soon

  • 13 years ago

    by candy

    thank you so much everyone. just so you know, this is not a true story, my mom is alive, although she hates me and i hate her too...but i wrote this in honor of my boyfriend, his mom passed away three months ago after being on comatose for 7 months. it was very hard for him, and he still cries to me sometimes. anyways, thanks for commenting.

  • 13 years ago

    by lovehurts

    great poem.. so sad

  • 13 years ago

    by candy

    thanks

  • 13 years ago

    by Jamal C Pennie

    It's a good poem....good job

  • 13 years ago

    by Emzie

    aww, that's really sad.

  • 13 years ago

    by candy

    thank you so much