Comments : Holding Her Last Breath...

  • 12 years ago

    by Jaime

    omg that poem really made me think.. i got shivers just reading it.. thank you SO much for posting it.. really need to think about that one.
    i love that poem tho it was written really good!

  • 12 years ago

    by mylilgreggy

    this such a sad but beautiful poem! if you have time, pls read mine too. i'm just new here. and i haven't posted all my poems yet. keep it up,. god bless

  • 12 years ago

    by Casondra

    Thanks. I haven't wrote many poems that I am really all that proud of, but I think this one has a lot meaning, it's one of my favorites, and I'm glad y'all like it too.

    Thanks
    Love Always and Forever
    Casondra

  • 12 years ago

    by faith

    holy sh*t ... that was holy sh*t ...i'm speechless which has never happened to me... wow.... thats all i can say

  • 12 years ago

    by Denise John

    WOW! That poem is Great. Um is it true? Any way keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by SWAPNIL SAWANT

    excellent poem. well written .

  • 12 years ago

    by Alyssa Aka: lyssa

    This poem touches me but reminds me of who i truely am, and this girl soulds like me and i sumtimes want to take that route, but i am afriad of the loved ones i will leave behind, but it is so hard for me to constrate sometimes that SUICIDE rings in my head, i don't think that it is a way out but i see it as a healer, if i really cause people pain and i am full of pain me leave earth could be the best! Ur poem was good keep ur writting up!

    Lyssa

  • 12 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Wow, awesome poem. Your format was great and you put so much emotion and feeling into your writing that you made the harsh reality hit hard. It gave me goosebumps!!! I hope that people will read my own poetry and be as impressed with it as I am of yours.

  • 11 years ago

    by Feathered Ice

    Very good poem…

    ”The happiest person and your best friend
    Could be the next suicide”

    It was and I couldn’t stop her… she was broken inside… she wouldn’t let me help her.
    I hope others don’t have to go through that…

  • 11 years ago

    by Feathered Ice

    Very good...

    The happiest person and your best friend
    Could be the next suicide

    It was and I couldn't stop her... she was broken inside... she wouldn't let me help her.
    I hope others don't have to go through that...

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*Curious Me*~

    OMG, is it true? this a really sad poem,this poem express how i feel,i can really relate to this poem.5/5 keep up the good work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Its defiantly a very good poem an you should be proud x x x x x its very very good. x x x x x

  • I'm speechless this is great im voting !!

  • 9 years ago

    by El

    I love this poem. It made me cry, its so powerful and emotional =(
    But is fantasticly written
    And I do love it =)
    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by VeinsofHate

    "Read between the lines
    Because everyone has lied
    The happiest person and your best friend
    Could be the next suicide"

    thats a painful line and so true.
    great amazing job!!! 5/5