I have a habit sometimes of placing my problems, especially when they're on the way out of my system, onto other people so i can have some kind of perspective and more importantly, distance myself from them.

This is the poem about that.

Nice poem, Kevin. Your last three lines were my favorite though. Take care.

~Grace

actually if ya'll would check the dates on who posted their poem first...I did about a year ago and she did just recently. so i would suggest you not ask me to do shyt cuz i aint gotta do nothing

Great poem!

I think that much of the difficulty you are getting with people voting or commenting on this poem is that it is grossly misunderstood by the mass populace. Anyway I really like it, it definately has some good points to prove. When it comes to the answer- I cant help you. I think I am struglling with that myself. The writing is good, the vocab is great too, most people wont understand the concept of the poem strictly because of the vocabulary, which doesnt matter. I like the ambigouity in this piece, and I like how the last stanza rhymes when the rest does not, it ties in nicely.

This is a response to the comment that I made beforehand. I do like this poem and gave it 5/5. I particularly liked the last stanza if you wish to have some consrtuctive criticisms it would be to try and get the sounding a little bit better some of the lines are longer than others. I choose to comment to complement people's work and not to criticise but it is still a good poem. Keep writing. Love Emma xxx

That's genius.. the weight of your words is amazing.. i loved

this gutless parry’s
weight I carry
for my troubles have not perished
like a virus passed to folks I know
they show themselves in those I cherish

perfectly poetic..

So I hadn't read your comment when I wrote that.. O well.. good poem anyway