Comments : For Cassidy, Somewhere

  • 12 years ago

    by Kevin

    Thats fecking brilliant mon ami...i'd say more about it in terms of advice..but you are one of the few who totally don't need it.

    I can't big you up anymore without being totally gay. You really love this girl eh? Some great lines about seeing her in your mind when you're blind and old...aw man.

    The second stanza is absolute gold. You should make a book matey.

    BOLD EFFORT.

  • 12 years ago

    by August

    I think he's from the isles.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kevin

    Yo August.....you should know that i've put you forward for the weekly poetry contest...that might disgust you...but well theirs nothing you can do about it now.

    My E-mail SI ; LeCosmic@hotmail.com

    drop me a line mr Man.

  • 12 years ago

    by August

    And it does. And I will.

  • 12 years ago

    by August

    what the crap was that praise thing i just did?!?

  • 12 years ago

    by Taylor

    well okay dude i tried to be nice but obviously that's not happening. . . if you don't want to read poems about suicide then why do you do it. . . hmm. . . let's see probably because you don't have a life and you have nothing better to do but say cruel things to people well let's see this poem is what the 10,000 love poem! OMG! no way. . . by the way dude this things kinda f'd up you see i try to be kind to people about their writing even when it suxs but after reading this there's nothin i can say. . .

    Love. . . um. . . not, Taylor

  • 12 years ago

    by Amerimov

    Thanks for that Taylor! August, you're fat but hey, you're a good kid, good luck with... er... cassandra? Yeah.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kevin

    Yo August, do you want those two rude comments removed?...just complain about them using the function and they'll be zapped.

  • 12 years ago

    by clevername

    o so that everyone thinks that hes some sweet guy in love with someone! hes not some fukin sweet guy kevin murray! he sure as hell isnt! his some fukin bastard that wood as soon shoot someone in the heart and throw that dman girl in his poem a big ass smooch! austin this is wut i hav e to say u insulted me ill insult u.....

    ....god damnit i ahte fukin lvoe poems! theres about a billion on ehre! aeveryone is jsut whining "o i cant get that girl" or "o i cant get that guy! im so depressed bc my lvoe life sux..." "y cant i have sex" get over it!!!!!!!!!!

    so how do u feel now bud?

    byt he way to all of u... i hav no problems with love poems!! jstu i was trying to prove a point to mr. big shot!

    august ur immature and stupid... ur so nieve.... and ur getting this from a 13 year old.. o but u r nieve... take a look around august ur not the onli one ehre!!!!

    ~bite me~ >:0

  • 12 years ago

    by August

    Kids these days! My goodness, that comment zapping feature looks advertising now. The sad thing is no one really looks at what you have to say when you misspell like that. You should all check out my thread on the forums, it's getting quite some attention!

  • 12 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    I'm glad you've kept them there... it's interesting that they have nothing to do with the poem itself, which rocks, by the way.

    Bert

  • 12 years ago

    by August

    Why, thank you.

  • 12 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Alright, I'm not actually going to comment on this because I usually don't partake in love poems, (thought I did find this romantic with defined symbols and beautiful imagery)
    this is just directed to everyone who has submitted those idiotic comments.

    Hey you guys, if you can't take critisizm, don't submit. You can't expect everyone to enjoy your writing, did you expect nothing but praise? Also, it's pure stupidity to comment on what type of person they are or how they live when you know nothing about them. GET OVER IT and try to move on and possibly improve your work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassidy

    Wow awesome,
    i wish someone felt this way aboutme
    haha,
    since my name is cassidy
    maybe someone does :)

    anywayss, very well written
    keep it up :)