Comments : I know its a lie

  • 13 years ago

    by Marta

    wow, i thought this was really amazing, such good rhyming and wording, a nicely written poem! i loved it, keep it up and thanks a bunch for your comment :) x x x x

  • 13 years ago

    by Andrea

    excellent poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Awesome poem, very fluent and well worded.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kara !

    A very good poem. Don't stop writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Purple Sparkles

    Wow..I liked it:) Great Work... Keep on writing:) Check some of mine if you have the time:D... I'm going to check other ones.. *God Bless*
    <3Love, Sedusha<3

  • 13 years ago

    by Krete

    Good Poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    wow... its a really good poem, i gave it a 5... but do you hate your mom that much?

  • 13 years ago

    by Kevin

    Em, have you tried to speak this one out? Cuase when i did it sounded very start and stop you know? Like it had no proper flow...and was....fragile.

    Nice issue, but i'd try and smooth it out a little.

  • 13 years ago

    by truthhurts17

    wow,great job.but does your mom really treat you this way??

  • 13 years ago

    by blarg

    yeah, she actually does!
    it sux thats why i'm moving to my dads.

  • 13 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Wonderful poem. Absolutley wonderful!

    xx - Kalah

  • 13 years ago

    by LiL One

    Wow...this poem has so much emotion, it means so much, Im so sorry if this is true, I hope things get better as soon as possible, but your writing is beautiful...Keep ur head up! LiL One

  • 13 years ago

    by Lucy

    full of talent, is this truth to you? very good