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wow, i thought this was really amazing, such good rhyming and wording, a nicely written poem! i loved it, keep it up and thanks a bunch for your comment :) x x x x
by Johnny Marlin 2
Awesome poem, very fluent and well worded.
by Kara !
A very good poem. Don't stop writing.
by Purple Sparkles
Wow..I liked it:) Great Work... Keep on writing:) Check some of mine if you have the time:D... I'm going to check other ones.. *God Bless*
by Shelby G.
wow... its a really good poem, i gave it a 5... but do you hate your mom that much?
Em, have you tried to speak this one out? Cuase when i did it sounded very start and stop you know? Like it had no proper flow...and was....fragile.
Nice issue, but i'd try and smooth it out a little.
wow,great job.but does your mom really treat you this way??
yeah, she actually does!
it sux thats why i'm moving to my dads.
Wonderful poem. Absolutley wonderful!
xx - Kalah
by LiL One
Wow...this poem has so much emotion, it means so much, Im so sorry if this is true, I hope things get better as soon as possible, but your writing is beautiful...Keep ur head up! LiL One
full of talent, is this truth to you? very good