Comments : All On The Line

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    this is a good poem, and i have felt this way before, a friend just left cause of her boi and it didnt feel that great so yeah. great job on writing bout it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautifully written, great job! Sometimes this does happen. Maybe she'll think about the meaning of a true friendship, before it's too late. That friend will be there when alot of times the guy want. Take Care, I enjoy all of your poems. lol

  • 12 years ago

    by blarg

    Great job! I really like all of your poems, you are so talented!
    luv,blarg

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    i know what its like to lose a best friend to her boyfriend. its not very fun. she is still with him too. he controls her all the time. we never talk anymore. i kinda miss her but i'm used to being alone now. so i guess it doesnt matter.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rena K

    I really like this poem... it kinda reminds me of my old best friend.. but a best friend is someone who'll rather choose a you then her boyfriend so i dont consider her a bestfriend anymore. Anyways very great poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany

    i know exactly how you feel in that poem, i lost one of my best friends to a guy and its the worst feeling ever! yet another great poem!
    xo-Brittany-ox

  • 12 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    This poem is beautiful and heartfelt and well written hun congrats - im sorry for the pain your going thru tho. I too am in the same situation only im in your b/f shoes not yours...i guess their comes a time we all grow up and settle down and move on - it doesn't mean your not friends anymore but your priorities change - im sure she thinks of you every day and prays for youe every night hun stay smiling
    Eirisa

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    WOW!!! that was a great poem. keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    hey!! thatz an awesome poem!! u did wrote it perfectly...i wouldnt change 1 thing...and i can relate to that...good job!!