Very good...I like all the Personifications like the Earth and Ski Kissing..Very good

Chris

Wow! That was cool, even tho, I'm not exactly sure what it's saying... In what situation would this poem apply? just wondering. Nive figuratives, tho.

~Ciao Lipton

That was soo awesome..I luv the Anologies you used..two thumbs up for sure..keep on writting gurlies!
Shanney

Great poem your always a pleasure to read!

take care

I like it. You have a unique style. keep writing cant wait to read more. Thanks for the comments. >3jess