Comments : You or my country

  • wonderful job, very touching. keep up the good work! have a nice day :o)

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    That end made my blood run cold. And for this courage you excite there is rare another kind. Thank you for sharing. Perfect.

  • 19 years ago

    by !*!Zoe!*!

    Thank you so much Elizabeth. You have no idea how much that meant to me.

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    I really loved this poem, it was absolutly touching. I have a few good friends in the war, I hope they make it home safe. Thank-you for writing this amazing poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kara !

    A lovely poem. It really made me reflect on the conflicts going on around the world. It was very poignant.

  • 19 years ago

    by Hannah M.

    I liked it a lot. It is a true scenario. Keep it up. You are very talented.
    Take Care,
    Hannah

  • 19 years ago

    by erely

    Excellent writing your emotions right out there

  • 19 years ago

    by Beautiful Drama

    Very well written!