Comments : Ashes to Ashes Dust to Dust

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    Ok please write comments, they help beginers like me. and please vote. thank you

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Amazing poem as always hun, but i unno if this is on purpose, but you put the poem in there twice...it was really godo, the rhymes were really well written, i loved your use of words, and all in all it was spectacular. xxxxxx luv ya

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Excellent :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Very good with the rhyming, you're very talented. Keep up the good work and you will go far.

  • 19 years ago

    by !*!Zoe!*!

    Logan, this is a beautiful poem. I love the repetition in it aswell. You really are a great writer,
    Keep up the good work,
    xoxZoexox

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thank you all for all your support, it really helps. =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    wow, great poem!! the repetition makes it sooo much more effective & meaningful, great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thanks for your comments again

  • 19 years ago

    by Mysticaljazlyn

    nice poem you are a natural at this...

  • 19 years ago

    by xeag

    great poem keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    wow that was awesome maybe you can help me out by a few comments on my poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    amazing poem...just awesome !!!!!! love,
    E.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Cool and amazing. Love the way you wrote it all.

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    nice poem!

    creative and beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Hey logan i thought that poem was great! ive red most of your poems and there all great!!! it'd really help me too if you commented on my poems aswell if you dont mind! i would really appreciate it if you did! If you can please comment on
    "to live a life of rhymes"! i dont care if you dont comment on the rest! but id really like that one to be commented on! please! and you can comment the other ones too if you want!! lol!
    Love Paige
    keep ^ the good work!
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo