Comments : Betray

  • 19 years ago

    by Leyesto

    not many poeple out there like to comment do you well if you read this comment plz comment on my poems i love to see what other people have to say good or bad news write for me plz

    *Steven aka Leyesto*

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    Excellent! I loved that! Really intuitive! It's almost as if this person, well has been betrayed, and definately wants revenge...And revenge is so sweet sometimes, within limits..Nice work--Ash--

  • 17 years ago

    by Phoenix

    This was a very nice poem. There's so much emotion, and it's worded VERY nicely! ^_^ 5/5