A Brighter Day

by deadnalone   Dec 5, 2004


Thank you for forgiving me. You know who you are.

I don't know how,
You all forgave me,
I'm so thankful,
For you answering my plea,

After all of my hurt,
That i sent toward you,
After all of the s**t,
That i put you through,

You told me the truth,
But we sorted it out,
You were there, stayed with me,
Rid me of the doubt,

That you would leave,
And never come back,
I couldn't live without you babes,
My soul would turn black,

You gave me another chance,
An opportunity to live,
A time still here with you,
With all the love you give,

I hope i never take you,
Take your help for granted,
You know that you can make me happy,
Make my life enchanted,

I know it will be hard,
To rid myself of blades,
I know it will be harder,
To forget the cuts I've made,

But i know you're there with me,
And i can help you too,
I am here to help with problems,
I will no longer forget you,

I didn't have to say those things,
I know i shouted and screamed,
I didn't want to hurt you, really,
I know i was angry and mean,

I never wanted to loose you,
The hurt that i would face,
Would be more than i could ever take,
While on this earth, this human race,

So thank you for staying with me,
And trying to keep my heart strong,
I know i can't understand it,
But you keep me living on,

The heart in my head,
And the one in my chest,
They both try to tell me,
That i love you the best,

You three i have hurt,
You three i turned down,
You three please never leave me,
You three turned up my frown,

You did it more than one time,
And you keep on doing it still,
I know that without your help,
I would take that final pill,

My sorry means very little now,
As i have said it too frequently,
But please believe me this time,
A brighter day, you've made me see.

*All comments and votes greatly appreciated as always.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    good poem hun :)

    lu -x-x-x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    i think your friends are lucky to have you, they should realize that someday, u may be gone, so getting mad is not what they should be doing but thats just me.....great job babe!

  • 19 years ago

    by sarah jenkins

    Your poems if very very good, i really liked the way that it was worded! If you could, if its not too much trouble, could you rate my "Theres a feeling that i get" and "The Wonderful Place" and maybe at comments?

    Thanks,

    Sarah