Comments : Lovers and Fools

  • 19 years ago

    by Aymon F

    "Envious are those who never feel the power,
    The growing and blooming of this passionate flower.
    They ridicule and mock the sensations we feel,
    But these poor souls will never know that it's real." I really liked that.

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    HAHAHa, that is a great poem, good stuff I have to say, this poem is so... true... so true... and when I read it I thought it was funny... sorry, Im a bit strange, but yes, very nicely done on the this one, :) keep up the good work, take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    That was amazing!!! I love your vocabulary, and you were able to stick with a strong rhythm and rhyme. Wow! I have no complaints on that one, Well done!!