Thank you for the comment sorry i'm a lil late saying this but Merry Christmas and a Happy new year and i want to thank you again for giving me a awesome comment hope to hear from you soon love ya!!!
Love always,
~*Tazzie*~

I really like the second stanza. You're a great poet never quit.

hey, this is great. very vivid, it's just awesome. i love it. really cool poem. ;-)

wow...im in awe! you are an awesome poet and you should never quit writing!

omfg thats an awsome poem well done indeed! xox fallen

"Breathless in a world full of air"
love this line with out a dought captured emotion so well done!!!

Running from a monster
A monster she can't see
great symbalism!
Breathless in a world full of air
ooo, nice line!
this poem is spectacular, I'm adding you to my favorites, I really like your work!5/5