Comments : One Cut Too Deep...

  • 12 years ago

    by Paula

    Hey thanks for all your comments on my poems, i really like this, this is the first one i've read of yours but i will carry on reading because if they are any thing like this one they'll be great! And about the title, i normally take one or a couple of words in the poem that stand out to me and use that as the title. xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    hey thanx paula! this meanz a lot to me...and no problem any time i can comment on ur poems...i liked them! they were awesome, and thanx for the suggestions! luv alwayz knoxy

  • 12 years ago

    by Cady

    nice poem! i loved it! dude, i have no idea wat to call it but its awesome!

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    haha thanx katie! i luv ur poemz too! keep on writing! luv alwayz knoxy!

  • 12 years ago

    by Echo

    Great poem i just wrote two more comment on them if u can this one was really good u have talent thanx's for commenting on all my poems.

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    hey thanx echo..meanz a lot to me...i will try to comment on ur new ones ttyl bye, luv alwayz knoxy , take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome poem, thanks for reviewing, titles confuse me so yeah...great work!
    -Erica

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    haha thanx erica! luv alwayz knoxy! they sumtimes confuse me too lol...take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Edina

    hey sweetie...
    that was such an awesome poem... damm! keep up the great work.. and sorry but i cant help you with the title either.. just go with what you have now because its the poem itself that really stands out.. i love it.. thanks for commenting on mine take care girly!!
    lots love~

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    aww thanx galina and edina! luv alwayz knoxy! take care!

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    hey thanx pearl and miranda, this meanz a lot to me, thanx for the comments and the suggestions! luv alwayz knoxy!

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    hey thanx chelsea, this meanz a lot to me, keep on writing! luv alwayz knoxy!

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    hey thanx baby gurl! no problem any time i can comment, cuz i know how good it makez ppl feel! and thanx for commenting and the suggestion on mine! it meanz so much! luv alwayz knoxy, take care hun!

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    hey thanx fadedsmokerings...i can comment any time, and thanx for commenting back on mine, it meanz a lot to me. keep it up! luv alwayz knoxy, take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Rose

    I loike this poem.... It's really good... You keep it up...

  • 12 years ago

    by Rose

    I meant I like it... Sry I was typing 2 fasts...

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    haha thanx rose! lol...itz all good...thanx for commenting it meanz a lot to me...i'll return the favour! take care hun! luv alwayz knoxy

  • 12 years ago

    by confusion

    great poem, maybe for a title you could have 'one cut too deep' ummm, cant think of anything else. any way, brilliant write!

    stay strong, lu -x-x-x-x-

  • 12 years ago

    by shane pratt

    Thank you for your comment,although i live in the united states i certainly do have a weakness for canada,i was born in toronto so i'll alway's have a little canadian in me,keep writing,your good.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kiersten Nicole

    Hey girl..
    i will try and help you with a title,
    my life's been taken,
    or
    I've had enough
    or even the one you have now is good,
    IDK, i suck with titles too.. lol
    :o) -K