Hey thanks for all your comments on my poems, i really like this, this is the first one i've read of yours but i will carry on reading because if they are any thing like this one they'll be great! And about the title, i normally take one or a couple of words in the poem that stand out to me and use that as the title. xx
that was such an awesome poem... damm! keep up the great work.. and sorry but i cant help you with the title either.. just go with what you have now because its the poem itself that really stands out.. i love it.. thanks for commenting on mine take care girly!!