When I look at you

by Jessica   Dec 28, 2004


When I look at you
I see a person so caring
Someone who could love me forever
Would that be so daring?

When I look at you
I can see into your soul
What I see is a person
That would make me feel whole.

When you look at me
I feel wanted and sure
That we could find true love
That would be so pure.

When you look at me
I feel happy once again
Because I’ve found someone
To make me happy until the end.

When we look at each other
The sparks sure do fly
Because of the feelings
That before passed us by.

When we look at each other
We feel so much more
Happiness, wholeness, and
A love that is pure.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tara

    i thought this poem was really good! i liked it a lot!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Thank you so much!! It really means so much to me to hear what people think! Thanks again.
    Jessica

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Thank you so much. That was very sweet!! Well, thanks again.
    Jessica

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Thank you so much!! It really means a lot. I wasn't going to post this one because I didn't think it was all that great.
    Jessica

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥kHarIsMa♥

    hey...great poem...i really liked it...thanx for the comment...keep um coming if youd like...keep writin..