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This hit way too close to home for me!!! that notwithstanding- killer imagery and captures the moment perfectly! 5/5
LOVE that poem. SO good. sparked my imagination, the imagery is wonderful. yay!
by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit
.....In my time, I, too, have seen this..........Bravo.
by Grey Ajurahck
Great title. You've really painted a sad tragic yet vivid picture with your words-great use of language.
I hate Cigarettes. but yeah i can picture this poem. you did it ! your good. lol.
by Anthony M
The form that you write in is one that I've been struggling to put to paper myself, after reading a few of your poems I'm left with a feeling of inspiration on what poetry should be and a little bit of despair that I'm so far from it.
Great piece here, you are very talented.