Comments : The lost boys

  • 11 years ago

    by jed

    This hit way too close to home for me!!! that notwithstanding- killer imagery and captures the moment perfectly! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Luke

    Iiiii.....
    LOVE that poem. SO good. sparked my imagination, the imagery is wonderful. yay!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    .....In my time, I, too, have seen this..........Bravo.

  • 10 years ago

    by Grey Ajurahck

    Great title. You've really painted a sad tragic yet vivid picture with your words-great use of language.

    Peace,

    Grey Ajurahck

  • 9 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    I hate Cigarettes. but yeah i can picture this poem. you did it ! your good. lol.

  • 7 years ago

    by Anthony M

    The form that you write in is one that I've been struggling to put to paper myself, after reading a few of your poems I'm left with a feeling of inspiration on what poetry should be and a little bit of despair that I'm so far from it.

    Great piece here, you are very talented.