Comments : My Life

  • 12 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    wow, you havwe gone through alot, and i know what alot of those feelings you have are like, i have alot of them too, keep up the good writing but dont hurt yourself more than you need to to get by

  • 12 years ago

    by twisted faith

    gr8 poem, it's clear that u put everything into this poem which is what makes them gr8. dont worry about shit hole bfs they rnt worth it. i found that out the hard way. n never hurt urself 4 a guy k?

  • 12 years ago

    by Edina

    that was so awesome! i felt like i was a part of it all and i wish i could help you out i hope things get better and take care sweetie!
    ~lots love

  • 12 years ago

    by Lo Lo

    that poem was hella good. but all i can say lil shorty is have faith don't let fake people bring you down, and anyotha bull shyt that come yo way. rememba "alwayz luv ya self cuz tha world ain't alwayz luvin ya" if you ever need anyone to talk to just e-mail me i can't say i been in teh same situation but i do listen and give good advice
    -*keep yo head high above tha res*-

  • 12 years ago

    by Ixora

    hey hun u think tahts bad ive been through worse-my parents b4 they died were both abuses...when tehy died i was forced to a family which theyre cousin raped me- i got pregnent and lost the kid- i ran away n live don the street- seeking drivers - i got raped again by a driver and when i went to the police they said i was delusional and set me back to an orpahnge- i went out of the orphange as soona s i was old enough and i got with a bf and for sex he drove me to my only luiving family member my sister0- she hated me ven more n said it was all my fault- so i left-everywherwe i went ppl hated me-they were repulsed by me- i live now here hating and living because i know if i died it wud b the best thing for them and i refuse to do taht least i make theyre lives better...so b4 u say anything bad or place pity think bout me n ull know that all taht shit u did was worse for someone else n tehyre still alive

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Sparkles

    Excellent poem, God Bless your heart! (Even if you say you lost in faith in God) Keep on writing!

    ~Sweet Angel Bliss Sedusha~

  • 12 years ago

    by Bizarre

    Wow, I thought things in my life were getting pretty bad, I mean every bad thing that has happened to me just kills me on the inside, but then reading your poem, I realize I've got it better than others and for that I should be thankful. I'm so sorry that sh!t like this happens to you, I'm pretty sure you don't deserve it. So just hang in there, stay strong!
    5!
    -shannon-

  • 12 years ago

    by ~iloveantz~

    hay jst wana sae thanx to al of u guis hu tuk tha tym ta commnt an vote! it meens alot luv ya lots guis thnx xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by mckayla

    omg i love that poem cauz im the same way like every thing in that poem is true to me to so your not alone. if your ever need anyne to talk to just write me my name is mckayla my email address is bad_gurl_039@yahoo.com

  • 12 years ago

    by S a m i e

    omgsh im soo sorry for everything sweetheart! gr8 poem!
    -samie

  • 12 years ago

    by Arlinda

    this was a very sad poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Sammi

    had all tht 2 me, it hurts i no but lift ur head high!

  • 12 years ago

    by truthhurts17

    i'm really sorry for everything thats been going on in your life. i'm pretty sure it will get better. i been though a lot this year also,but eventually everything will pull though in a postive way. just keep your head up. i wish you the best of luck. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Azlin

    I know how you feel ...The words cannot explain that every single day i know that people like us are in pain sit back and listen to what i have to say cuz our feelings never fade they just grow everyday ...this is supposed to ryme because its the only way i know to show and to grow ...heres my email adress calliendo@yahoo.com if u need to talk here i am cuz i need a friend too

  • 12 years ago

    by Lolly

    this was a gr8 poem. sorry bout all the crap you went through, but hey i think every gurl goes through that. I know i did

  • 12 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    gr8 poem..woderfull..deep feelingz keep upda gd work...

  • 12 years ago

    by nickie

    Wow this is very well writen but very sad...I hope you're okay and I hope you're strong enough to make it through....you've been through a lot and don't just give up on life now...just finish it off I promise it will get better as you move on....I give it a *5*! Great Job!

    Love
    Nickie

  • 10 years ago

    by ~miSs~tEEnagE~pRinCeSs~

    ..wow! that's awesome.. i had related myself to u.. my gosh.. haha.. i guess, its just that.. its life.. huhhh...good luck to u.. and to me too.. hehehhe.. nice one! =) two thumbs up!