i know what you mean this poem reached out and grabed me 5>>

A great and awesome poem. lol

hehe this is a great poem! Has a lot of emotion and is very deep, and the way u have worded it makes it flow so well, just amazing, Excellent writting! Keep it up:o)

Very Deep, and so beautifully put together .. awesome work I LOVED IT !!!!!!!!!
=D

THIS is sooooo good!!!!!!!!! omgosh, i love it!!!

your writing style is beautiful!!

Welcome to my FAVORITES!

*LOVE** jenny

that wuz exelent! i luv the originality, most ppl use a knife. kep up the good work!

.:*Yin*:..:*Yang*:.

Indeed boredom in the idle mind is a
death defined.

wow i am speechless

let me give a more in depth comment i get the sense this poem was inspired by a personal experience I mesmerized by the mysterious metaphors wichh speak to my spirit. I can really relate to the note I hope I have given this dark poem the praise it deserves sometimes it is difficult for a tallented poet as yourself not to go over someones head I gave it a 5 I LIKE YOUR STYLE

Got it!! he!he!

wow! amazing! great poem! i love it! so descriptive and sad! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

hi Hayley, nicely done, you have more style than most do, I sometimes wish I could write dark poems, but if I could they would never match yours, you do such a great mjob, keep up the good work as always your friend Harry

Nice

That was awesome, as are all your works. I just thought I would tell you (if you are interested) that I have many new works if you would care to read them, if you liek any of them please comment.

Sincerly,
Matthew

GOOD ONE I LOVE HOW THIS FLOWS...lissaXX

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lol sorry
in other owrds that make more sense
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS GOOD IT TOUCHED ME THANK YOU!!!!

I wish I could have had a copy of this to give to a friend of mine a few years ago...

Thats pretty sad there. Its like the quote, though I don't know the exact wording, it's better to take risks and die then never truly live. Your rhyme was excellent but the meter was off in a few places. Still, I thought this was a great albeit sad poem.