Comments : Icebound

  • 12 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    Another excellant peice; the imagery is amazing

  • 12 years ago

    by pinkalias

    wow...again!
    Absolutly beautiful. The astounding words were put into place so perfectly, it jsut impacted me in a deep way. The way you just pull out words and form them together is something gifted. again, the symbolism is fantastic, and I absolutly admired the stance,
    "Through furs and flesh this primordial assassin
    Maws indomitably spiteful until even shivers
    And farewell whispers are naught but frozen epithets
    To the haunting glories of heart-fire and possibility."
    So much incredible use of text and symbolism that create such a dramatic effect and leave the reader wanting more. Fantastic job

  • 12 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    Beautiful poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Monique

    AMAZING PIECE OF POETRY! You are an incredible poet; keep up the astounding work!

    Tres Bien, Mon amie! (in french)

  • 12 years ago

    by Monique

    *mon ami

  • 12 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Excellent job, I loved it! =D

  • 12 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    I LOVE so many words you use in this poem. Excellent write. >3jess

  • 12 years ago

    by miss scooby

    OH MY,
    what a beautifully written poem. Dont get upset lol but, reading this made me think of edgar allan poe...because your use of visual aspects within a dark prespective contrast between you and mr.poe....dude, if you can make me {the mind who wonders off into la la land} think of poe when reading your work {mabey its just me}...WOW...BRILLANT...LOVED IT your going on my favorites mister.
    Take care always Mr.Miles
    scooby

  • 11 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    You created such a desperate craving! And your words call out to be caressed with admiration.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    Another simply amazing poem, the use of the cold/the landsacpe as a creature/entity is most excellent and adds a great deal to this peice. although there is no rhyme to this poem the flow created by the words you used made it flow just as easily as if there was a strict one and makes this poem all the better. 5/5
    ~jacob

  • 9 years ago

    by Damned from the Holy

    Wow this poem gave me the shivers now my hands are cold and its like a 100 degrees.
    When i can feel your poem, it means your doin a good job. Keep up the good work.

  • 9 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    High praise! Thank you.