Nice, but sad because i have lost 2 friends through death. I am a single guy who is going through a lot of pain.

So depressing! I'm glad I don't have a twin. I really enjoyed this poem! You should keep on writing =) You have a wonderful talent I do not lie. Well done.

Wow, I would say that is very good. It has a good story line to it. keep up the good work

omg thats awesome.....really sad...but awesome....

wow that was really good, but really sad. I liked the way that it told a story in it. Nice job

hey thanks for commenting my poem. I love yours! Its absolutly amazing! when i read it i started crying. Keep up the good work

beautiful, tragic story.

Omg i love this poem it is sad im about ot cry!!!!!!

I am crying Sarah. Everytime i read this, i cry.

I really like this. Very well put together...a story in the form of a poem...but dont most poems tell a story? Anyways it was very moving. Great job!
Cryptic

Such a sad story..very touching indeed.
Take care always,

;;^^Kalah

WOW wut a wonderful poem! it wuz so sad, i almost cried! u r great poem writer and have really good ideas, keep up the good work!
.:*Yin*:..:*Yan*:.

Sarah that was a lovely poem. Well thought out. You can tell you put a lot of feeling into it. Details are a big key with writing... writing anything. I'll have to read more of yours. Keep up the great work! =o)

Very tragic story. I liked this a lot. Good descriptions and everything. Very well done.

wow that was really good. its sad, but it just shows what u do for love and stuff.

:DGreat Poem Sarah! Wonderful details on the poem! Keep it up! God Bless you! Take Care hun! *5/5*...

~!~Sedusha~!~

Oh my girl, I felt like I was there when I read this.
Excellent write and a very sad poem, it made me cry. ) o;|
Dang!!! I’m just going to have to read it again.

It’s a 5 all the way

Wow thats an amazing poem, very vivid i could picture it in my mind, sad stuff, i hope its just from artistic imagery and not from a person experience.

Wow!! that was really emotional. awesome job!! makes you think of the thingz you take for granted, keep on writing, take care hun!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

omg that poem is so good, made me cry...thanks for commenting on my poem, im anxiouse to read your other. beautiful, keep it up.