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by Karlton Earl Freeman
Nice, but sad because i have lost 2 friends through death. I am a single guy who is going through a lot of pain.
by Erica BrownÂ©
So depressing! I'm glad I don't have a twin. I really enjoyed this poem! You should keep on writing =) You have a wonderful talent I do not lie. Well done.
Wow, I would say that is very good. It has a good story line to it. keep up the good work
omg thats awesome.....really sad...but awesome....
by Ashleigh Skye
wow that was really good, but really sad. I liked the way that it told a story in it. Nice job
hey thanks for commenting my poem. I love yours! Its absolutly amazing! when i read it i started crying. Keep up the good work
by Unseen Exposure
beautiful, tragic story.
Omg i love this poem it is sad im about ot cry!!!!!!
I am crying Sarah. Everytime i read this, i cry.
I really like this. Very well put together...a story in the form of a poem...but dont most poems tell a story? Anyways it was very moving. Great job!
Such a sad story..very touching indeed.
Take care always,
WOW wut a wonderful poem! it wuz so sad, i almost cried! u r great poem writer and have really good ideas, keep up the good work!
Sarah that was a lovely poem. Well thought out. You can tell you put a lot of feeling into it. Details are a big key with writing... writing anything. I'll have to read more of yours. Keep up the great work! =o)
by Lance Hardy
Very tragic story. I liked this a lot. Good descriptions and everything. Very well done.
wow that was really good. its sad, but it just shows what u do for love and stuff.
by Purple Sparkles
:DGreat Poem Sarah! Wonderful details on the poem! Keep it up! God Bless you! Take Care hun! *5/5*...
Oh my girl, I felt like I was there when I read this.
Excellent write and a very sad poem, it made me cry. ) o;|
Dang!!! Iâ€™m just going to have to read it again.
Itâ€™s a 5 all the way
by Sunset Rising
Wow thats an amazing poem, very vivid i could picture it in my mind, sad stuff, i hope its just from artistic imagery and not from a person experience.
Wow!! that was really emotional. awesome job!! makes you think of the thingz you take for granted, keep on writing, take care hun!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy
omg that poem is so good, made me cry...thanks for commenting on my poem, im anxiouse to read your other. beautiful, keep it up.