Oh My God... This poem, or song, is the best I think I have ever read. Wow, it's fantastic!! These are my fav lines:

I’ll tear your soul to pieces
And act like things are fine

So powerful. Definitely keep this up.

Love,
Tiff

too long and the message was to hazy to even to interpret.

I thought that it was great. keep up the good work , 5/5