I haven't been reading these but when I saw you had written a part IV i thought i should go back and read the earlier ones, and I'm so glad that I did.
This isn't your usual style of writing (a storyline) but somehow you make it into a work of art anyway. I don't know if this is an expieriment your doing but so far it's going fantastic.
The piece kept the reader entrance with wonderful imagery and a perfect introduction that was portrayed with emotional thoughts set in a beautiful way. I can't wait to read the rest