Awww SO CUTE!!!!

OMG that was so sad it made me cry but it was really well written great job

Wow. Is it a true story? Sorry if it is. Keep your head up and if it's true..at least you have your son. I give you a 5 check mine out if you can...keep writing =)

beautiful poem... im sorry if its true...
good luck with everything. great poem.
xox
Samz~*

I am sure your husband would love and appreciate that poem from the bottom of his heart. Great job!!! 8)

Wow....My heart started beating so fast as I was reading that. That was an amazing poem. So sorry though it is sad. Keep your head up and take care!!

i really like this poem. i'm sorry about it. keep writing your really good.

OMG THAT IS LIKE THE MOST PERFECT POEM! I REALLY LOVE IT! AWESOME JOB!
-SHANNON-

that was beatiful and i wish i could say more

Very sweet poem...well written. I really like it! Sad!!!
Please rate and comment on some of my poems...thanks

Hi, I just read your poems and your style of writing is excellent.Keep it up girl.It keeps one guessing whether is real or not.Poetry is my life,but I use it to express how I an dother people feel.

hey that was a really good poem, it made me cry. if that happened to you i'm sorry for your loss. but he is in your heart, always. he's like the wind, even though you can't see him you can feel him. i hope you and your son have a wonderful life. and don't give up, because there is always something. no matter what. if you need someone to talk to email me at chika_4_eva_loved@yahoo.com or if you have yahoo messanger it's the same, and for aim it's turtle nmbr1 .
i'm here if you need to talk
with much love,
JeSsIcA m.TaYlOr

that's so sad i'm so sorry i hope your ok plz if poss cld u check out some of my works fanks xxxxx

i really liked your poem and its really sad and i was about to cry

i really loved ur poem, it touched me. thats extremely bad if its a poem from this actual experience! keep ur head up.

You have all of my sympothy. I had a loss but not as big as a almost to be husband. Please know that and angel will always be watching you because you have gone through the hardest thing that any of us could imagine.

i like it youve earned a spot on my favorites =)

That was a great poem and if the story is true i am VERY sorry for your loss. I give you my prayers keep writing your very good.

I love this poem it shows that being sad about a death will always last but you can always have different ways to change it

This poem is touching... i think i have tears in my eyes...!!! Very good writing... keep it up...
Brittany