Although its lengthy its compulsive reading! I was drawn to it and HAD to follow it thriugh. You've done well on this one. Keep it up.

omg love this one more than last one i totally agree with your moral at the end. didnt care how long it was coz it was so worth it

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itz really cute.. u have a very strong message/moral.. could u check out some of my poems.. plz..

gr8 poem!!! luuved it...a bit long..but worth to everyonez time..to let them know that love isnt blind!!! soz keep it up!!
tc byeee

Very long, very good. <3