Interesting, you seem like the song writer type. I usually don't like the 'slang' words but you did good. Nice job.

I thought it to be a very interesting but good poem.. I really liked it it was different.. keep it up:)
Jenn

Out of this world. I absolutly loved it.

A deffinetly Lit-Mag Featurette.

5/5

Nice poem.. Great work..
keep it up, 5 stars for you..
please check out my poem "Stupid Girl"
Would mean a lot to me =)

Take Care
Hugs

Great poem i really enjoyed it and it had nice flow! It was interesting and unique and very special!! Keep it up:)
xoxox

very unique. i like the different style and the content especially. i enjoyed this. keep writing! take care:)

Excellent poem Luke:) Very Unique! *5/5* God Bless!

**~**Sedusha**~**

I gotta say. That was pretty good. Deffinately not bad. I don't know many teens around here that can use that type of slang. Originally I don't care much for the slang poems but you did an awesome job with this poem.

-BJ

I'll admit, not what I was expecting when I saw "slang poem". But it was captivating. You have a magical flow to all of your poetry. In three words: you amaze me.

I can't wait to go read more...!

I thought that this poem was absolutely beautiful! I Loved it so much! It flowed so well.. you are very talented. Keep it up & don't ever stop writing. great job! 5/5****