Comments : Transformation

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    *Laughs* yes thank you.

    And I always appreciate your encouragement.

    Lastly, congrads on your Rise to 50+ favorites!

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I liked your message and your worded text, and some of your symbols were quite lovely, but this wasn't my favorite from you. The usual power and emotion wasn't there, there was no ignited passion or connection that I usually get from your work. This piece seemed well written, but not as intriguing and in depth as your others.

    Do not get me wrong this is a very lovely piece of writing, I only say this because your definetly one of my favorite authors and I know you are capable of better.

    So overall well written, just not your very best (in my opinion)

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    You are quite right, actually. Lord knows I didn't expect anyone to bring it up, many would not *chuckles*.

    So now you will see the broad difference between my favoritism toward the supernatural, and my experimenting with depicting and molding some sense of reality.

    Thank you for your acute attention to notice. It helps when honesty is made obvious ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    I enjoy the introspective stroll inherent to this poem; wholly human. But as a poem, there's a meandering to the emotion and pensives. Was it intentional and consequently tone? Or did you lose sight of where you were walking?

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    It's pretty much as afore mentioned. I was tip toeing through a basic inexperience. Reality has never been my...fortay?

    I'm a supernatural enthusiast, as anyone who's found that to be my pattern, would noticed.

    Thank you for the introspect Miles *smiles*.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    Again, words to express more than one. Everytime I read I gain a new ideal.

    *beams* You made me look in the dictionary too!

  • 19 years ago

    by erely

    I have always liked your writings your intelligence shines through and the inagery is great...Good Luck Elizabeth

  • 18 years ago

    by Dare Id

    The first line of your poem is encouraging...It's such an expressive poem with rhymes...Keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Dare Id

    The first line of your poem is encouraging...It's such an expressive poem with rhymes...Keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Strive On....