Comments : That Little Something

  • 12 years ago

    by bluehun

    I LIKE THAT ONE.well written,5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by **Stary_nights**

    aww this is really adorable:) i really loved it!! excellent job..definately a 5/5...no doubt abotu that. thank you so much for you comment on my poem. i really appreciate it!!~ take care~
    *Brittany*

  • 12 years ago

    by .

    thanks for commenting on some of my poems i really appriciate it! this is a great poem deffinatly a 5/5 keep writing! i enjoy reading all your poems
    *-Becky-*

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah M.

    That was a really great poem. Very cute and touching. I loved it, keep it up.
    ~HaNNah~

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    its really good but lose the caps.
    5/5
    ~Freak~

  • 12 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    aww this was so sweet i really loved it! Nice job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby B

    Wow this is amazing and I am sure many can relate to this poem. You put a lot of feeling into it I can tell. Great job
    Oh and thank you for commenting on my poem :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    That is so nice. I like the fact that this piece is open for the reader to imagine who it is written to.

    Is it written for a mate or lover, or is it written for a parent or child. I love that there is no concrete person to recieve this.

    Excellent job!

    --Sher

  • 12 years ago

    by Darien

    If i had friends like you..
    I wouldnt need a girlfriend..
    hahaha awesome poem :)

  • :) Thanx! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by abcede

    wow.. great poem!!! the repeditive aspect of the beggining of each line adds such an awesome creativity!!! great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Shawn Williams

    scarey but good

  • 12 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    i kno you was Thankin bouh Me wen you wroTe dis poeM Lol.. nahh Buh iz hella Good doe... all yo poems iz..10/5 niKkaz... Das whaS reaL Good...

  • 12 years ago

    by Nikki

    This is amazing you did a great job. Keep it up 5/5 much luv

    ~Nikki~

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    Very nice poem but the caps "ouch' they hurt . Much is left to the imagination of the reader I really like that . Keep up the great work

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Beautiful poem. I don't have much to say otherwhise. It was great.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    I wish i had something like this...this was a beautiful poem. another great write, and another 5/5

  • Wow nikki this is such a beautiful poem!! i love reading your work, great job 5/5
    luv courtie

  • 12 years ago

    by Am I Your Favourite Horse

    OMG this poem is so great i love it stick to writing it will take you some were

  • 11 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Really nice, liked it alot :)