Comments : Prelude to Night

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    wow, spectacular. What can I saw, your imagery is amazing. The points and scenes you chose to imitate your vision of the atmoshpere was so beautifully written I was completly lost in a pictured world of symbols and colors
    (does that sound weird?)
    Beautiful job, excellent

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    High praise, especially from all of you. Thank you mightily. All I can say is... you should have been there because it was a truly incredible sight, something unique amongst the twilights I've seen. (And I like to consider myself a connoisseur of sunsets.) It was a sunset to film or paint rather than describe.

  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wish we could have seen it!!! Phenomenal description of it..if it couldnt be filmed or photographed you surely did the next best thing!!! great work!:)Michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by erely

    Beautifully described,I have watched it in the sunrise...it's totally awesome and the power of it is overwhelming...
    Your writing to is awesome

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    You did a great job describing this poem, it was perfect and very vivid. I thought you did a wonderful job

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    The imagery in this poem was spectacular. Your poetry seriously makes my heart tremble. It brings about such emotion. I loved this one. My favorite one from you so far.
    This was my favorite part: "This star will not go gentle into this death of light.
    With grudging admiration for such heroic plight,
    Humbled by this ageless battle’s evocative might.
    I indulge in the stirring beauty of this sight,
    Even as I celebrate my allegiance to mother night."

    Lovely!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jin

    It felt good reading this poem. Gives you a sense of serenity in sorts. I love it!... Nice Work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Monique

    As everyone else has previously stated, the imagery in this poem is breathtaking. Your writing style allows the reader to be part of this poem.

    good work, and please comment on my new poems.

    --nique.