i loved the poem cuz i can totally relate. i loved the ending it was unique, keep writing can't wait to read more.

:D, thx

very expressive. I believe we all feel this way sometimes, even about our truest deepest lovers. Then again, we feel the same loathing for our friends, family, and enemies. Love hurts....great job portraying that.

Wow this is such a great poem. i love it :D

I never read this, but it makes sense to me. I miss your poems Adam.