Roses are Red

by Daniel J   Jan 18, 2005


The roses are fresh,
The scent is strong,
The petals gleam red,
But time has moved on...

The roses have wilted,
The scent is quite gone,
The petals have faded,
But our love stays strong.

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© Daniel J

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    But our love stays strong.
    ---omg such a great ending!....5/5....i was wondering will you comment my new poem FOR ONCE....thanks!!...comment back pleasee!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Taryn

    I love it! Its so hard to put so much feeling into a small poem, I congradulate you for doing that, and writing an amzing poem. Keep up the writing, You have true talent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    UGH im seriously so jealous... when i first read the title of your poem i thought " oh no not onother roses are red violets are blue" kind of shit poem... but this one... theres somthing unique about it. you made it different, you made it you. i like it... its such raw emotion i could never get into my poems... i just wish i had such the creativity you posess.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    loved it, so short but soo sweet
    i like very much your stuff

    . . . p i l i ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    That was short, but incredible. I loved it.