Comments : Vibrant Dreams

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    good job!! i like your poems a lot, keep writing! please read and comment mine if u get the chance.
    -Molly

  • 19 years ago

    by Fatimah

    Serena you're talented and your talent is unique, I like your words. What I didn't like was that there is too little space between a group of lines and the next group, it made me read it too fast and didn't get the full taste of it :D

    Anywayz, good luck!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite, wonderfully done!!!