Amazing poem!! Wow I'm speechless I rarely read poems this good!!!
Keep on writing!!!
P.S Thanks for you inspiring and uplifting comments they really mean so much to me!!
LOVED IT!!!!
Tash
XOXOX

that was such a sweet poem, good job i gave it a 5 :D

Neat poem!! The last verse was amazing! But twas all very good! Excellent work! Keep it up! I'm adding u to my favorite, I really like your poems:o)
5outta5
Shannon

i like this one less than the others I have read, i don't know, jus don't feel it as much no offense to you, just not big on love poems i guess....besides i think you could of took it further.

God bless
love Heather.

Hello,

i would be happy if u add this to ur Quotes :

"i live in the present; the now, the here
my future?..no one knows, not even a see" ( u know wut i mean)

its beautiful,and ur words expressed some kind anger or somethin ! : )

Peace,
Darla

I dont know ! but if somebody hurt the other like that ! cheat or lie ! how could we call it a love partner ! who loves never could hurt ! right ? so its better to call it somethin else !

peace,
Darla

i love this poem i give it a 5 its awesome thanks for commenting on my stuff, cant wait to read more of your stuff
~!~Noelle~!~

This is an awesome poem...only thing I saw wrong was a couple grammatical mistakes...mail me if you want to know them, some people get offended when you point them out ya know?

I agree with Rua Francis, that is truly mint as a quote by itself.

Here's the mistakes I noticed...

"our love flew higher then a eagle or a bird" then should be than and a should be an.

"you cheated and you seemed to loved him more" loved should be love.

"my grandma meant more to me then you pride" you should be your.

I don't like the flow of your poem, the syllables are quite off. I like the feeling put into it though.

another great poem!! 5/5 again, you have some real talent in writing, keep it up.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Those eyes so beautiful and brown
look to them; my sorrows they did drown

^^^Such a beautiful phrase!
This is a very personal poem and it is really sad:(
I hope all is well with you now, Shaun:)

Hugs,

Ingrid