Great poem and very descriptive!

I love how you are able to take something so odd and unexpected of an object used for a piece like this and turn it into this beautiful work of art! your symbolism is, as usual, defined and beautiful. The way you chose these common things to play the most important roles in the piece was wisely done and absolutly lovely.
Excellent job

once again, great work. you never cease to amaze me with your wonderful way to write about anything and everything. may you pursue any goals with your poetry.
-monique-
PS: thanks for commenting on so many of my poems. it was very insightful. i love how you are a very versitle writer. (spelled wrong). Honestly, you are a great poet.

Thank you, Monique! And it was my pleasure. You have some great poetry and I wish I would have had more time to get through more. I will definitely be going back, though!

Wonderfully written. You just gave me a new perspective of suburbia. I love your style and the way you give ordinary things a whole new meaning.

*Sigh...I guess I''m just going to have to add you to my favorites now.

I love your POV, and the fact that even though this sounds so depressing you bring it back with the last couple of lines. This is a really different and unique poem. I liked how you kept it short but packed with such vivid imagery. Nice work :)

Im a fan of this.

the thoughts that come to mind about the twilight tv consumption are inspiring.

Tom.