Really like dthis poem is was just so beautiful the way you explained everything gave real imagination! Keep writing
kt xx

Wow, magnificant piece of work! i really like your wording, very strong and you experiment with your vocabulary, i like that, as well as your rhyming patterns- VERY GOOD! 5/5!
luv ya!
kt

great poem! really amazing how you wrote it and the words are amazing! i love it! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

5 stars! ***** I'm adding u 2 my favorites list! You are a talented writer! Keep up the good work!