hola! yeah the poem is decent, but i'd reccomend using Allah instead of God, seeing how you will find about 3 Christians and Jews in Iraq. Also use "mother" not mom... it would flow a little better i think... good job :)

This is really powerful and it puts a lot of things into perspective....
XxX Charli XxX ~*~

Oh my such a sad sad poem i do feel for the inosent (cant spell lol) men women and childrean over there god bless you

That's such a sad poem. It was really well written.