Harsh as life as good for some. As your prev poem read.

Every perspective will argue and not always be the perfect paradigm. What it means to love and hate.

Too bad we cannot just exclude psycopaths who've already proved themselves...(opinons would warrant my using Saddamn as an example).

Remarkable!!!

Nice poem. Keep it up & take care! God bless you! <3

not bad

Very beautifully written, yet very sad, pointing out the faults of our humanity.
I love your style; it had immense flow, yet was so differently written. Brackets and disjointed sentances, they added a superb feel to the poem.
Well done! Brilliantly written!

Sound bites of "freedom"
And "Let them eat cake."

PRICELESS!!! I loved this poem. It is so very true. You couldn't have expressed it better! Excellent.

....yup.....

Im afriad to say this is way over my head, it was brought to my attention by dwelt, who recomended it to me in a contest, but i feel it is too high above my standards that to judge it would be unfair to you as their are many things about this poem that i am simply too young and unknowledgeable to either understand or appreciate.

from reading this poem (and a few others of yours) i can however appreciate that you are a very talented poet and one that should not confine yourself to the limited capacity of this website and the people who cannot/do not appreciate your writing. get out there and show your talent to the world!!

-biscuit-