I would be lost without my computer!

Excellent work, Trincy!

(Love the cyber babies line!!!)

I didn't write this poem in a positive way. Because of internet, relations look so close but actually they are so far.. I wrote it in a very ironic mood!

I thought my point wasn't clear. And so i added the last line after Ann marie's comment. Bhaskaryya, Actually i don't like this poem....... IT had no rhythm..it was more like a prose. As a prose..It was okay. I guess.

even though technology gets us closer,the happiness we get when we are together is entirely different...i guess you have made an excellent point here...take care and keep smiling..FIVE>>>

hey trincy i do agree with u....the fun that actually meeting ur relatives, friends, etc personally; gives us cannot be matched with this so called cyber fun.... still loved the way u mentioned this fact thru this poem..keep writing!!!

heyy...! i thought it was very creative and i like the idea alot! yeah i wouldnt survive without my computer!
*~~`SoNjA`~~*

excellent satire!! i havent read one in a while and this is really good. i like the structure. great work!

I loved this poem for I definatly agree with you, the internet has a way of making us reclusive and callus to what should be important things in our lives, it has a way of shutting us down and turning our lives upside down when used incorrectly. I liked how you chose to voice that side of things. nice work.